A time for Revision

Its come down to the last week of writing our essay and its all about revising. On Monday, we took a look at the different use of voices within our paper; today it was all about looking at the order of the paper. For today's in class exercise, we took our paper apart, paragraph by paragraph, and played around with the arrangement for a bit to see if there was any way to make the structure better. Normally when I write a paper, I tend to keep the original order because I didn't think it was possible to switch it up and have it still make sense. However, after doing this exercise, I realized that you don't also have to stick to the original flow of your paper. Sometimes you can make a bigger impact, just by switching up a few sentences. This exercise has been very helpful in giving me ideas on how to improve my paper.